Happy Friday!
Today's task is writing! 😊
EITHER:
1. Write a description of this picture:
- Describe the beach
- Describe the character
- Describe the house.
OR:
2. Write a short story that begins with the sentence: “It was a disaster. I didn’t know what to do.”
- Use both short and long sentences
- Use sophisticated vocabulary
- Don’t forget to use interesting punctuation and lots of description.
Hi Leah! I have done the description:
ResponderEliminarI think in this picture there has been a natural disaster, may be an hurricane or a tsunami because everything is destroyed.
We can see that the beach is very dirty and that the sea level has risen and have left traces of its content in the sand; We can also see there is a house that it half ruined and it´s about to collapse. It doesn´t seem that there were victims when it happened.
I think that the man who appears in the middle of the picture is the owner´s house. He´s looking at his house, and surely he feels sad: he is a tall bald-headed man that wears a red vest and black trousers.
This day doesn´t seem very peaceful and it´s a very bleak image. I wouldn´t like being there.
Really good Nico! 😊 great use of language, especially 'half ruined' and 'bleak'. I also like the sentence: 'the sea level has risen and have left traces of its content in the sand'.
EliminarWell done!!
Hi Leah, how are you?
ResponderEliminarThere was an hurricane in this picture, all the hauses was broken and the beach was very dirty, there was no people in the hauses because they cant live in a broken hause because is very dangerous.
PAULA ROMERO 6B
Good job, well done! 😊
EliminarHi Leah I´m Alberto of 6ºA.
ResponderEliminarI´m going to do the story:
It was a disaster. I didn´t know what to do. After that tsunami, most of the population has moved to another city. I only stay with my family. Where am I going to life now? I didn´t know but if I will stay with my family I feel safe.
Kisses.
Good job 😊 I especially like the question you have included.
EliminarHi Leah.
ResponderEliminarI do a story:
It was a disaster, I didn´t what to do, my family was in the house and they die inside, I go to the house of my friend, her father went to see my house and manolo take a foto this was the foto.
One kiss, Elisa 6ºA
Hi Leah i´m Miriam of 6ºA
ResponderEliminarI think it could have been a hurricane, when it passed there I only had misfortune, and with it I took half a yellow house, it made the sand of that beautiful beach was full of garbage. And the man there is looking at everything that had happened and I also think that that yellow house, the one that has suffered the most from the disaster is his house.
Well done everyone! 😊
ResponderEliminarHello Leah. I am Marcos García-Rama of 5ºB
ResponderEliminarI think that a sunamy occur. The beach is distroyed, the sun is bad. The man is worried for his house and he is very nervous. The house is broken and the man has to fix the house to live.
Bye bye